My second original character, here's the bouncy bunny girl Bunya-Chan. I've retooled her design for '09, returning her hair to it's original soft red, and removing the headband she used to wear. Also gave her a real bunnytail this time around. Anyway, next up is KumiKumi, enjoy all!

*enjoys*

I like the face on her! and this is a fun perspective

I don't understand the back.

URG I CAN'T STOP STARING AT THOSE LIPS. ANd that SCARF. And the widdu carrot on her boobie. <33

This is sooo sweet I bet her boobs have sugar milk in them!

It DoEs. (I'Ve TasTed It.)

I dont really get her back/shoulder thing she got going on there

the anatomy here doesn't make sense at all

is fearsome this starved for a pair of anime tits

if you look closely with some good eye for great perspective you see it could easly be a good perspective! so why the bitching over anime tits? I like it E!

It's perspective.

can't blame me I'm dutch with no good translation thingy

Eh, I think this would be a lot better if the anatomy made more sense. To me, the only way that the back would work is if her right leg (our left) was propped up on something out of sight, because you can't see it and her bum is twisted that way.

lol whiteknighting

that's not perspective at all, anatomy just doesn't work that way

it's like trying to explain away a child's scribbles with OH IT'S JUST THEIR STYLE

LOL ANONYPOSTER ANTAGONIST register and draw you whiner

weh weh weh fearsome can't take criticism of bad porn wow

1.) i'm a goddamn girl myself, who isn't fat, and i tried to do that pose in the mirror. perspective ain't happenin unless you do what someone suggested with the lifting leg thing

2.) so if you criticize one piece of someone's art as an anon you have to sign up and draw to prove yourself but hordes of anonymous praise can go unchecked? not even 'oh you love this so much how about you sign up too and join the titfest my friend~~~~' i love double standards too!

if you're going to take that attitude why even have anoncommenting on at all. if you don't have an account replace the comments field with 'dick sucking' i guess?

I love how man-gaycentric this community is. If a guy was doing this, there'd be nothing but chicks slobbering all over it's penis, but if ANYONE draws tits, you'd get a ton of "BOOBS DONUT LOOK LIEK DAT. HIPS NO GO SWINGY DINGY."

Granted, I'd like a bit of anti-aliasing in things like this, but tits is tits. Get over yourselves. It's just as much wank fodder as your ork on elf man porn.

i hate badly drawn man porn as much as badly drawn anime tits

e is not a good artist and everyone slobbers over his dick regardless because he draws balloons for breasts despite pillow shading all over the fucking place and having no grasp of female, let alone human, anatomy

i have seen better tits get critiqued i am not sure why these are so sacred

I swear to god I'll turn this car around.

she looks familiar!! XD

E! your getting so good! :)

I have always admired your shading skills

E! can do any when it strikes the mood. why should it be drawn just to YOUR satisfaction?

gd-kun: But dad, I don't want to go to Nana's anyway and Grandpa smells funny!

(Edited on January 28, 2009, 10:16 am)

hahahah you are a child

IT'S JUST STYLE

IT'S JUST PREFERENCE

NOTHING IS OBJECTIVELY BAD *mashes ham fingers into jars of fingerpaint, smears them over mantits* DON'T CRITIQUE MY ART!!!

look at it this way:

if he actually takes some fucking time to learn to understand shading (where's the light source here?) and anatomy (that fucking shoulder is wrong on so many levels and the back just makes me cringe) then he will be able to produce better porn FASTER.

just because some people think his art is fucking terrible doesn't mean you have to jump in and defend him, he's a big boy and can take a hit

and if he's a mature adult he'll take it in stride and strive to improve instead of curl up into a blubbery pile like his fans seem to think he will if someone fails to suck his cock

So is there a point to this internet rage, or do you just like to see your words appear in public? For the one millionth time, critiques are encouraged on this board. Anybody who says otherwise is wrong. Stop with the pissing matches, people, you're getting piss all over the place.

i am annoyed because legitimate critique written in a less abrasive manner was shot down by people who felt the need to defend their precious porn artist rather than accept that he's not perfect and could improve :)

the rest is raging because i am full of hate

'critiques are encouraged' yes when they're not for e! i guess, have you read the rest of this or any of his other pictures where critiques were left and his fans were like NUH-UH IT'S STYLE

Posting a redline or just remaining civil are usually better ways to get a critique across.

Well w, thanks for all of your 'helpful' critiques, but I've already moved on, I think you probably should do so as well.

I had a feeling that even if I weren't trolling you wouldn't listen to a thing I or anyone else has said. Thanks for reaffirming that belief. :) Go on drawing like a teenage boy at age thirty.

PS: "is fearsome this starved for a pair of anime tits" is not a critique. Dur hur hur

Their is a difference between critique and criticism. You simply bashed it. You didn't give any helpful advice.