Shi practice, trying to learn the ropes with layers and shit. Iv never used layers in my art, but im gunna start, it seems easyier.

Your picture is very cute..I love those boots..

The lines are a bit rough... But I really like the colors in her hair. Especially the purpleish bits that look like the undermost hair was dyed separately. There's a neat depth there.

This picture just strikes me as kind of blah... like, the lazy background is kind of a bummer when it looks like she's clearly sitting on something, and the lack of effort in the hair/boots. This could be cool, it looks like you have some talent hiding under there, bring it out--spend some more time on it. I like her outfit and it looks like you had something going with the hands.

Actually, I love it how she is sitting on nothing. The coloring is great! Loving the pose. I guess her laces could have been better. But it is still amazingly nice!

I agree with Erie, there are many color bleeds and the lineart seems rushed. I do like the character design and her posture though. A bit more time and this picture has amazing potential, you have a lot of talent in you, and I'm sure I'm not the only one eager to see it ^^'

i really wish you'd put more effort into your drawings. i'm sure you're capable of so much more. for example, the fact that the feet, boots, and laces are so rushed can really distract the eye from the rest of the picture.

I agree with everything that has been said here. It's cute though.

i like the solid colors and writing

Listin...guys, i just clearly said on my this picture that its only practice xDD; Iv never really used Shi(besideds using watercolors) and I was practicing with it, its not like i only draw on this oekaki, so you havent seen all my stuff. If you dont like me expiramenting(or drawing at all here) i'll just do it elsewhere, no big deal i guess... But thanks for the comments, it really helps :] Ill try working on my line art and such.

Before becoming defensive, how about reading the [url:http://fearsome-oekaki.com/showrules.php]rules[/url]? Traditionally, practice images are not permitted. You should be appreciative of the fact that this wasn't simply deleted for violating rule#1. For future reference, it would be best if you didn't use this board to practice. This board is for your best work only. I applaud every comment on this picture. Everyone was helpful and friendly.

A doodle of my charcter, Dee. the pose looks akward...

your character is guilty of copyright infringement.

does that strike anyone else as a pretty jackass thing to say, especially anonymously?

The only thing I can see is maybe a resemblance to that girl from flcl. Besides that i don't know any characters with crazy-huge hands like that.

to be honest, this is kind of an ugly drawing. your shading is pretty good, but the legs and groin lines are way off. the hands are obviously so :P the eyes and hair are good.

Viral's sister?

lol

wtf I doubt any of y'all could do any better, besides i fail to see how this looks like Viral or the chick from FLCL
dont say the piccu's 'ugly' just say it has some flaws.
jesus

I think if you're gonna be a douche, let's not do it anonymously. Thanks.
Anyway, I like this pic. It's true the bottomt half (legs esp.) are kinda off, but And is also drawing this at an odd angle. It's hard to practice something that's at an odd angle like this.The shading is awesome, and her face is definetely my fav <3
Also, I see no copyright infringement. It's also increasingly hard to create a completely unique character these days, so shut up. If the character was say, an exact copy of Haruko w/ different color hair named "Haraka" that MIGHT be copyright infringement.

When you're doing solids, you've got to be careful. I see a lot of mistakes in this, most notably being the shakeyness of the lines and how generally rushed it looks. Some of the shading is good like on the hair and face, but in other places it looks rushed, particularly on the thigh area. When doing solids, it's best to make it as clean and precise as possible. Now I'm not saying this is a bad thing, but I've seen way too many people lately copping out of doing a background by making it the same color as the page itself. Sometimes it looks good, other times it looks like laziness. Overall I think this pic would be better off cleaner with some type of a background on it.

Honestly, I think what the picture needs is a shadow or something else under her feet to ground her. But the linework here is good.

i... i think its the style?

it's just the style guys... i personally really like the simplicity of it. though the hands, even though intentionally large, look kinda off to me. the fingers coulda been done a bit better i think, atleast on her right hand.. they just dont look as creepy as the left. I like the band-aid on the knee and the torso looks nice. Good job

No such thing as original art, all artists are naturally theifs and there's nothing wrong with that. If you like the way something looks it hurt to replicate it and change it.

Claiming you did it first is different ;O

This pose is really odd, and thankfully you admit to that. Being in a blue void only makes it seem more awkward. And yes, I've seen many people around that have latched onto TTGL style, and maybe thats why some people my see a similarity to a character from that series. But, even if the hands are huge, you have to remember hand anatomy. The hand on the right seems bulgy and off.

thanks for the crits. but like i said on my comment..this is kinda..just a doodle..sorta xDDD;

fearsome isn't really the place to "doodle". this isn't a practice board.

lets all go cry and cut ourselfs now :(

and by the way, i think most peoples characters are guilty of copyright infringement one way or the next.

@anon: i kinda bag to differ on that one. Iv been stalking here for quite sometime and have noticed a couple "doodles" done by the members here, and yet i have not seen them being bitched at for it. Trog: I belive some people have aready said that sorta statement, so if you dont have anything new to say besideds 'go cut yourselfs' then thers no need for you to comment. c:

She's pretty cute for a mutated freak. I love the delicate lines.

I like your style! she looks really awesome~!

Of all the drawings to wank about, I wouldn't have thought it would have been this one. The sweat drops are nicely done.

I'm really sorry to be driving this thing even further, but this would not bother me so much if only it didn't look like an eyeballed copy of the link in my URL.
I didn't go looking for that either. It occurred to me as soon as I saw this.

I know you're capable of some really great stuff that is all your own, so it disappointed me to see you draw this without any sort of credit.

I shouldn't be posting, but if you had just goddamn posted the link to that picture in the first place instead of being a cryptic douche, we could have argued over that instead of assuming you were giving her a hard time about the quality of the drawing or the character design itself. If you have anything important to say, do it logged-in

Sorry about the misunderstanding, but I (the anon that linked the picture) am not a member, nor am I the first anon that called her out. That was the first comment I'd ever made on this board. I dropped by because I know this artist outside the oekaki.

wow, kemonozume hands! i like it))))

hello again this time iv drawn something more promising... anyway...this is a werewolf of somesort, lets just call him Gallon shall we? He looks like him....

Oh my, this is sooo creepy. reminds me of "the brotherhood of wolves" or whatever this film was called...

I agree, good show.

Is there actually a picture here? My monitor can't make any sense of this. :/

Thank you I apologize for how dark it is D:

i like how dark it is, so don't appologize.

I couldn't see how much detail there was until I tilted my screen forward. Excellent work! Creepy as heck!

Cola: that's exactly why I don't use LCD screens. :/

hey,sup fearsome.

even though it's furry, it's still pretty rad! great colors. the eyeball especially.